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Critical Analysis #2

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Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2003-06-19 08:48 PM

Wassail

A bouquet of spirit wealthy
Hoves over these casts of beauty-
The charms we do, each cordial song
Of worthing love, love worthing long.

We keep us wine, and it divine
With noble thoughts in each new line
The goblets are crowned with this so strong
Of worthing love, love worthing long.

Give passions loose, and worries truce
To follow the waywise, fair Muse,
For solace, far from the sore throng,
Of worthing love, love worthing long.

A dance enrounds with graceful sounds
The heart conveys, savour abounds
Fragrances and flowers among,
Of worthing love, love worthing long.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (06-21-2003 02:55 AM).]

captaincargo
Member

since 1999-11-25

Posts 109
Corning, N.Y. U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-20 08:06 AM

This is very good. I especially liked the tempo as it just seemed to flow right along in my mind for me. The rhymes were smooth and I especially like the third verse. It was to me a good toast, good advice.

It sounds like a good party.

Cap.

[This message has been edited by captaincargo (06-20-2003 08:10 AM).]

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

2 posted 2003-06-21 02:54 AM

Grand Merci Sir
I am glad you joyed my wassail cheer.
Come back soon

Essorant

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