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Cytten
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 16
Canada

0 posted 2003-06-19 10:25 AM


A life of tears
A life of fears
closing in on the one that cares
stumbling like no ones near
a world of fears
a world of tears
a world I can not bare
some time I will not see
what it really means to me

trudging through this love sick world
as seasons go by
winter ...spring...summer...winter...spring..summer..
falling into my dark abyss
crying out for hope not my bloody  tears
shivering and shaking
growing each and every day
soon this life will be done


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~DreamChild~
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 544
in your dreams
1 posted 2003-06-19 05:11 PM


wow!...I_like!

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality
                ~DreamChild~

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