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Critical Analysis #2

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raevynsbreath
Member

since 2003-06-06

Posts 64
Mi, USA

0 posted 2003-06-19 11:33 AM

drama finds itself between a rock and a hard place,
with death pulling it through and life holding it back

one billy goat guff calls to hatred,
with eyes of fire and breath of ice

the faerie falls, arms flailing,
as its life comes to a screeching end

the fear finds itself overcome with love
and the faerie lands among the bodies of the free

drama rears it's evil head and lets out a scream of fayth,
for hope holds all as fate cowardly slinks away

the no capital letter "style" i have really means nothing to the poem.it's just laziness and my like of small letters.just thought i'd let it be known.
as always, good day.
_rae

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

1 posted 2003-06-19 05:14 PM

hmmm....
cant_quite_relate
but_keep_it_up_anyway.

Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality
~DreamChild~

o. forrest cain
Junior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 17
West Virginia

2 posted 2003-06-19 05:23 PM

This took a little thought but my intial feeling of this being the final curtain was closer to the mark than I thought (or so I think) This then is the transition between life and death? I enjoyed this read.

forrest

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