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raevynsbreath Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64Mi, USA |
what's your favorite flower? (i don't know. why?) oh come on. you've got to have a favorite flower! (not really.) well just pick one. so i know which to throw at your funeral. (that's just a bit morb|d don't you think?) no, not really. (how do you figure?) i see it this way, you're only morb|d if you don't believe in death. (that doesn't make sense.) well sure it does! if you don't believe in death, but talk about it all the time like you know it all, you're not only morb|d, you're stupid as well. (*chuckle* that's funny. but i still don't really get it.) you will... after you die. (hypocrite.) |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
i'm very intrigued by your views on death this dialogue made me think |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Hi Raevyn, very interesting poem. I like the "dialogue" concept, it works well for the subject here. Good job!  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Sorry Rae but this one just doesn't work for me at all. It must be my bad kharma or something. I really don't see any way to improve it. IMHO, of course  Pete [This message has been edited by Not A Poet (06-17-2003 11:35 PM).] |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
heya...the diagloge thing is really cool..but I'm not sure if I understand the full concept behind it??? I asked God how much he loved me... |
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