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sadpoet Junior Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 10Tx, USA |
Moving People. Always Moving Always on their way to Somewhere. Always. Whether Somewhere is Tomorrow, a Year from Now, or just one more moment Here. Whether Somewhere is that Great New Job, a New Home, or a Big Raise. Whether Somewhere is Love, a New Beginning, or the Realization of a Dream. People. Always Moving. Always going Somewhere. I hope You find your Somewhere. Good Luck. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Question - what is about initial capitals that appeals to you?  K |
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raevynsbreath Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64Mi, USA |
this is good. but i am also wondering what's up with the capital letters as well. if it's style, it's unique. and i like it. _rae |
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sadpoet Junior Member
since 2003-05-29
Posts 10Tx, USA |
Actually, it is a sort of sytle that I'm experimenting with.  |
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V. Tomir Junior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 20 |
Mr. Sadpoet After reading "religion" I thought I had found a poem that ranks near the top of the list of bad poetry, however, you've outdone yourself with this one. The awful truth is that what you are trying to say is only second in mundanity when compared to how you say it. This is one of the worst poems I have ever read. There is absolutely nothing interesting about the poem except for the fact that you have the odacity to think this is a poem worth sharing with anyone other than a subdued family member. My advice, either stop writing poetry or make the effort to learn how to write reasonably decent poetry. Regards. |
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