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Critical Analysis #2

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maverick55
Junior Member

since 2003-04-14

Posts 36
Texas

0 posted 2003-05-09 08:00 PM

I long to see again the beauty that lies with in,
to lay together, and feel the touch of your skin.
to know the way you smell, to feel the softness of
your lips as they lightly touch mine.

This is what I dream of when I wake, when I sleep,
to experience the freshness each day of your
love, that has touched me so deep.

I have discovered who you really are.
You are the dew in early morn
glistening on the grass in the sun,
You are the breeze that rustles
thru the trees.

You are the very breath I breathe
each moment of the day...

You are the love I thought was lost
the bright blue color of the sky,
the beauty of an emerging butterfly.

You see, you are the very essence of me.
You are the vision in the artist’s art,
and I am Married To you In My Heart.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-05-12 09:03 PM

soft and gentle, a nice way to tell her you love her

wings of the moon
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

2 posted 2003-05-15 01:53 PM

yes, a very sweet write...
will come back later maybe and post soem more

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