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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
One Love is a force that keeps two people together Love is a force that lasts forever. You used to be two, but now are one, Sheltered from the rain and protected from the sun. You no longer hurt, for you have a pair, To love, to cherish, and to deeply share. You are both angels from heaven, God sent you here To bring us all together and wash away the fears. Your love shines brightly and over powers the sun, You used to be two , for now you are one. You are a team, two people who work together Love by all, and promised to last forever. Your love for each other burns fierce then a fire, You are loyal to each other and fulfill each others desires. You share the same hope and you have the same needs, For you are like two flowers , and are each others seed. Your love will last a life time, until you reach Eternity, For then you will reach heaven, You will be an angel set free. AshgieL |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a beautiful love poem.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very nicly done! SG |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Very nice love poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm voting...... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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