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Mandy and Mehgan
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Mandy and Mehgan |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Chapter 1. Little One "Mehgan, Where are you?" Asked Mandy "I can't see you Mandy I can here you" "Mehgan are you okay? are you crying or laughing?" "I am crying. I fell and I can't move. Help me." "Mehgan hold still I am going to call for help." .....Mandy dials 911.... "911...what is the problem?" "My friend Mehgan fell and she cannot move. We are in Wyatts Cave on the path to the left. We aren't very far down. Can you get us help she is bleeding bad." "Yes we can help an ambulence is on its way." .....Mandy hangs up..... "Mehgan they sent a ambulence talk so I can get over to you okat?" "I am over here." .....Mandy walks towards the voice..... "Keep Talking Mehgan" "Mandy it hurts help me." "Mehgan tell me what happened" "I was walking on the path and tripped down a ledge. I fell pretty far. There us water right below me about an inch and I am right by the edge of the ledge its about 14 ft. from where you are your right above me about a foot to the left." "Alright. Um Mehgan do not move at all. Wait till the ambulence gets here. They will help you can you tell me about how much blood you lost?" "I won't move. But it hurts so bad. I haven't lost too much but my head hurts and my my right leg and left wrist hurt a whole lot." .....Paramedics arrive...... Chapter Two- Falling ....Paramedic1 looks at Mandy.... "what is your name and what is your friends name?" asks paramedic1 "Her name is Mehgan and I am Mandy"Mandy replies "Mandy, what happened?" "I don't know. I was walking and got pretty far ahead then I heard Mehgan scream so I called back and she was hurting, so I called 911." ....Paramedic1 peers down the ledge towards Mehgan.... "Mehgan...Can you tell me what happened?" "I was walking behind Mandy and I tripped over something and fell over the ledge and landed down here. There is water about an inch under me and an inch away from me if I roll over I will fall in water. I don't know how deep it is and I don't know how to swim." "Mehgan we are going to come down and get you. Because of all the porblems don't move okay?" "I'll try." ....The paramedics work their way to Mehgan.... "Helllllllllllllllp" .....The paramedics hear a plop in the water below..... "MEHGAN" yells Mandy "Are you okay" ................No answer from below....... .....As the lake came into view.... ..The paramedics continue down towards the splash a whole lot faster than they were going. With Mandy yelling in the back ground. .. "Mehgan.......Are you okay.....Can you hear me?" ..The 2nd paramedic finally reached the platfrom to see Mehgan was not there. She had fallen into the water. .. "Mehgan fell we have to enter the water."The 2nd paramedic called out to the other "Mandy call 911 again. Say we need scuba assistance at Wyatts Cave." .....Mandy pulls out her cell phone and dials 911..... "911...whats the problem?" "Hi I am with the paramedics at Wyatt Cave they need assistance Right now with scuba gear. My friend fell into the water." "They are on the way." ...The phone clicks off.... "Sir... They are on their way." "Mehgan say something answer me." "MEHGAN" Mandy is now in a state of panic. Could she be dead crazy thoughts are dancing through her head. Am I about to lose my best friend? Mandy wonders. ......5 minutes pass in silence...... Mandy is getting uneasy, she doesn't know what to do, think or say. Mandy with tears streaming down her cheeks looks down to the paramedics. .......The Scuba team arrives......... "Mandy, We are trained scuba divers for the department. We are going to try and get Mehgan okay?" Said one of the 5 guys in scuba gear ........out of nowhere they hear a very distant and distinct....... "Mandyyyyyyyyyyy. I am okay. Just come get me" "She's okay. She's okay." ...The scuba team enters the water in search of Mehgan... .....Mandy Faints.... "Mandy.........Mandy........Mandy......"The paramedic1 said." ....4 minutes pass.... "Mandy are you there." ....another minute passes..... "I am okay... I just got a little dizzy. Is she okay did you get Mehgan back yet? "No we haven't we can't find her." ....Meanwhile at the scuba search.... "Hurry guys."Mehgan yells "We are coming just keep talking." "I can't hold on much longer." "I thought you were on and Island." "I was but its sinking" "What do you mean sinking" "I am standing the island is now under water and its up to my knees." "Okay we have picked up the pace hold on." ....The scuba team finally reaches Mehgan.... They see her standing to her waist deep in water. Then she....... (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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