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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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foul slut flexes biceps bisects bi sex fits cobbled up and puffy pious politics Buffet self serve stuff sip it puss fest spit spiel piles leftover slept off oft poets and pit bulls bull s flip suits for years four years the club set C2003 Night Hawke [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (01-13-2003 12:05 AM).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Hi L.R, I am not sure what to make of this poem, whether it is political or social commentary, what your point is, which makes it hard to critique. Though its not going to stop me giving my thoughts on this. I really liked the opening lines, and the whole “foul slut flexes biceps bisects bi sex” I was unsure of how the next stanza sound until I read it aloud, it made sense in relation to the first and third stanza. I wasn’t really fond of the next part, “puss fest…………slept off oft” Personally I found that the imagery lacked the strength of the pervious and final sections. It seemed too judgmental (i.e. “puss fest….” ) and not as subtle as the rest of the poem. Just the way I, personally, felt about it. I can’t offer much more of a critique. I have my own thoughts of what the poem is about, it might be completely different to the meaning you intended. I enjoyed the read. watched from the wings as the scenes were replayed we saw ourselves now as we never have seen" ian curtis |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
an experiment that just didn't work I'm afraid.. but thanks anyway |
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