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Critical Analysis #2

Betrayed

wjdec
New Member

since 2006-09-04

Posts 1

0 posted 2006-09-04 09:16 PM

She'd sensed they were there,
watching, scrutinizing every word,
true instinct,
deep from the gut,
bits of circumstantial evidence-
so she set out to ensnare them,
unaware they were clutching
the past so tightly.

unable to sort fact from fiction,
they fell headlong into the pit,
her shadow engulfing them,
blinding them to reality.

now she knows,
and the knowing brings pain,
they don't see her for who she is,
has been for years,
they only look to the shadows,
that apparently will
follow her forever,
the trust she worked
so diligently to earn back,
should have earned,
is non-exsistent,
to them,
she will never be whole.

she does something
she hasn't done in years-
looks to the sky,
tears in her eyes,
and asks, "Why me?"

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-09-04 11:40 PM

very sad.. but I liked it.. good job

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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