Critical Analysis #2 |
Plenilunitude (Haiku attempt) |
Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
The pearly moon sits on profoundness fullfilling plenilunitude. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Is "plenitude" the word intended? |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Plenitude is part of it. |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I gave the word to the online dictionary and it could not find a definition. Is this a word you made up? |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I think "plenilunitude" is made up out of plenitude and luna, which makes perfect sense to me in this context. Of course it could be my Dutch mind making this up, but if I'm correct, this is what I call creative writing. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I agree Munda. In this case, a made up word works fine for me too. Pete |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...plenilunitude...', well, I have never seen this word before and neither has my Websters, but I like the idea of luna and plenitude and the title sure got my attention. Nice job. Hugs, Marti |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Radrook I will have to notify them that thier dictionary is missing a word I hope you still liked the Haiku. Munda You are spot on Thanks for your kind comment. Not A Poet You always have a keen nostril for smelling out sense too Glad you enjoyed. NewEnglandlazurlu It s my second haiku ever. Thanks for taking the time to read and enjoy. take care, Essorant [This message has been edited by Essorant (11-20-2002 12:03 PM).] |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
I like the poem. I was just wondering about the meaning. I did initially notice the "luna" part but wanted to make sure that I was understanding the usage right. Thanks for sharing! God bless! |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Thank You Radrook. |
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Epicrean Junior Member
since 2002-11-17
Posts 16 |
its simply great... your word plenilunitude adds the very twist to tie it all together and hit home! |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Epicrean Thanks for stopping by to read. I'm glad to know you enjoyed. |
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