Critical Analysis #2 |
Ordinary |
Monk Frost I! Member
since 2008-06-15
Posts 80 |
Strange the task of a verb Indicative of a sentence Ordinary most of our word Lost in complacence |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
I think probably the most important of words is the noun Nouns are cool, a verb only gives the subject motion. A noun is what gives the thought its meaning and changing a noun can change the meaning even greater than a fast hare vs a slow turtle. Reverse it and we have a slow hare vs a fast turtle. But change the nouns and we can have a fast hand vs a slow woman, or a slow hand vs a fast outlaw, a fast wit vs a slow retort, or slow cheese vs a fast cockroach...heh Verbs give thoughts motion, but nouns give thoughts spatiality [This message has been edited by turtle (03-10-2009 02:34 AM).] |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
From PiP Philosophy: "If you have a large inventory of poems you've written we'd love to see them all - but, please, not all at the same time. We like to give the other poets room to post their material, too, so our software allows no one to post more than three poems a day. This also give(sic) you the time and opportunity to reply to the works of your peers, always an important part of our community. We have a great bunch of people at the forums, and everyone is having a wonderful time. Abiding by these simple rules will keep it that way!" |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Monk, Moonbeam speaks wisely. The 3-a-day rule works pretty well in the fast moving forums. Here in CA, where the intent is to thoroughly analyze each post, it does not work at all. Even one per day is usually too much. It takes time for the group to discuss a poem. The way you are flooding the pages gives a strong impression that you are simply dumping your computer here, possibly because you don't know how to clean it up otherwise. If that's the case, learn to use the Delete button instead. As moderator of CA, I ask you to please stop the spam. Or at lease slow down to where it might become something of value in a critical analysis environment. Pete |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
I've got a much better idea, guys . . . |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Sorry Ron. You see I usually wake up grouchy, and being greeted by these gems each morning is rather like walking into a kitchen wallpapered with posters of Britney - addictive but enraging Ok ok I know. I enrolled for anger management only the other day |
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