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dracula68
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since 2008-09-07
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Illinois

0 posted 2008-09-17 05:57 AM


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Kill all gods by the fourth act.
Yes, yes you must,
by all means, show the guns
and lay out the plot as well.
To reminisce in the myths of our ancestors
most high, most anointed and statuesque
and lay out the desperation that followed
the public demands blood
and reason in equal measure.
So let the guns blaze and the knives twist.
Kill the hero who battles the gods
in the fourth act along with them
so the last act can be left to life and people -
the people, yes, in the final act
milling around the stage
while glancing over the program
for sons' and daughters' names.
People conversing near the proper red exits
or lingering beneath the antiseptic lights
flickering in the hallway entrances,
who crane their necks to catch
a glimpse of the hero
who just might come back for real
sooner than anyone thinks
to chat a while, informally.
People waiting and lingering
as they idly mention birthdays
and congratulate promotions as they fidget
unsure of stepping out into the cold tunnel,
exiting for good into the parking garage light
while others sweep around the footlights, mop the stage,
clean the gods' fake blood from the rubber knives
and remove the stage lights while waiting
for applause no one will give them,
second bows that never come and the curtain
no one is ready to close

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BROTHER JOHN
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since 2006-04-06
Posts 386

1 posted 2008-09-17 09:44 AM


Dear Dracula,

Thanks for your comments on "The Shell."

I am not versed enough in poetry to critique the techs of this poem.

But I  keep pondering, if all the gods are killed, will anyone be left alive? If by gods you mean authority, lawlessness follows.

BJ

dracula68
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since 2008-09-07
Posts 30
Illinois
2 posted 2008-09-17 11:35 PM


The idea behind this poem comes from Nietzsche. Without getting into detail, his basic question was "Once we have killed God, what can come next? We've already done the most monumental, horrible, stupendous thing anyone can possibly do. What do you do for an encore?"

Agreeing or disagreeing with Nietzsche's assumption isn't important (at least not for the poem), it's what you do as an artist with the scenario.

My answer is that, we just mill around, check our watches, small talk here and there. Thoreau called it "living lives of quiet desperation."

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