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ronald might
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since 2008-06-05
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0 posted 2008-06-05 09:10 AM


I look to the sky and wonder,
oh what a great height.
if only a jump
if but only a leap.

the scent of your hair
the colours of your eye
your porcelain skin
and your soft lips

memory has a trick
like magicians who seem to show truth
i'll be the audience
awaiting for the poof

yet the scent lingered
the colours remained pure
and touch
and memory

true as the sun i once said
true as the sun it happened
tears that quenches this fire
tears the fallowed my desire

there must a magician an ebullient prick
only to trick and lie
my lonely passion
hang him my poor magician

why still the scent,
the colours.
only to feed my senses with desire
my truthless bliss

with a jump and a great leap
i look to the sky and wondered
what a great height
my lord my lord i wondered.


this is the same one as my previous post..just thought i had a change to the title..

again..please ...any comments.

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