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Bill Shirnberg
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since 2007-10-28
Posts 50
USA AOK

0 posted 2007-11-07 09:16 PM


Don't know it I really much care for this one. thought I'd throw it out there though
my fears and doubts
divide my despair
As the angels pierce sound
Through the rarefied air
guess that Holy Ghosts
got no time to spare
So I’m go’n where I go
When I’m go’n no where

She don’t care

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chopsticks
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since 2007-10-02
Posts 888
The US,
1 posted 2007-11-08 09:12 AM


Bill, it’s hard to believe you are the same poet that wrote this :

“  He'd too drunk he go sleep nnot nnnight he'd too drunk “

The first two lines sound like something Lincoln might have said.

“ My fears and doubts
divide my despair ”

I like it a lot, it speaks to me.  



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