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Critical Analysis #2

Aliens

chopsticks
Senior Member

since 2007-10-02

Posts 888
The US,

0 posted 2007-11-04 11:53 AM

Tomtoo, this is about as gory as I get.

ALIENS

It was about forty years ago
that some crazed aliens came down
and had their way with most of us
while we were sleeping sound .

It was a crime against nature.
It was a midnight coup.
Like the Kung Fu monkey,
they knew exactly what to do.

I may be the lone survivor ,
for reason I wont tell
They just didn’t do me .
They didn’t ring my bell.

But here is a good example
of the hideous things they did
You may want to differ with me,
he is only just a kid..

Now he is my oldest grandson
The weirdest you have ever seen.
He does not drink or things like that.
He dyes his hair dark green

His girl friend has an eye ring ,
but nothing on her ear.
She always drinks bottled water,
but will never have a beer.

I think that they have my values,
maybe it’s just a joke.
They are so quite and respectful,
after they been out for a smoke

It happened about forty years ago.
Hope you know what I mean.
Mixing of the species.
The mingling of the gene.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2007-11-05 02:56 AM

oh, come on chops, X-ray does the samething. and all those industry polutions. You don't have to make up Aliens.

Tomtree.

chopsticks
Senior Member

since 2007-10-02

Posts 888
The US,

2 posted 2007-11-05 07:15 AM

Out of a cloud of dust rides the lone Laureate and his faithful poetry companion Tomtoo.

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

3 posted 2007-11-05 05:04 PM

see you are able to write very emotional verses. not this poem though.

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