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blister Junior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 18here, elsewhere |
beneath our "be back soon"s we'll file into flowcharts and escalate into thirsty rhythms that collect on wooden doors the contrast that will seperate what is and what is not colonizes the smallest bones that hold our feet together to expose itself to the mud and recount its weight in pounds some stillness is understanding this dancing is our discovery while we share exaggerations and point out tendencies so it can rearange our day into thirty-minute shows catapult regressions relapse to imperfections we stand here uninspired scents swallowed by lye singing grunts and moans blocking every view -mr blister |
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guyoverthere Member
since 2007-08-12
Posts 58 |
As Jennifer mentioned to me, take your time posting. Give the good people here time to review your stuff. Also, be sure to proofread your stuff. I noticed a spelling error in your first post and you misspelled 'exaggerations' here. I'm still looking at the first one. |
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