Critical Analysis #2 |
Rose |
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Should I compare her to a rose that in some stately garden grows Pruned and tended watered fine Magnificent upon her vine While deep within a jungle green where camoflage and speed are king death is quick and strikes unseen there is no time for loving Tencious there a single bloom fights the foetid humid gloom to bring bright colours seldom seen into this world of brown and green No gardeners eyes have ever laid upon the beauty there portrayed No loving hands to keep it safe Yet still it blooms another day .. . Live It |
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longte Member
since 2005-04-06
Posts 199Australia |
Should I compare her to a rose that in some stately garden grows Pruned and tended, watered fine Magnificent upon her vine While deep within a jungle green where camouflage and speed are king death is quick and strikes unseen there is no time for loving Tenacious there a single bloom fights the foetid humid gloom to bring bright colours seldom seen into this world of brown and green No gardeners eyes have ever laid upon the beauty there portrayed No loving hands to keep it safe Yet still it blooms another day .. . OOPS Few mistakes in the first one and I have not worked out how to edit yet Live It |
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