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Roysie
Member

since 2007-08-05

Posts 102
Canada

0 posted 2007-08-13 01:21 PM

Carefree

I saw them out walking
all hands and arms astray
a motley crew indeed endowed
with hope and determination and
very little coordination
they passed me by unthinking perhaps
of life and cruel fate as
I was thinking of how lucky I was
to be me and not them
to live and love and fulfill
my obligations endless sometimes
never giving up or in or
over to humdrum mediocrity
fighting the good fight striving
for success and reward and
not feeling as happy as they looked
not back but forward carefree

Can anyone guess who or what I'm describing here?

moonbeam

Member Elite

since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

1 posted 2007-08-13 01:24 PM

Your recent poems?

[This message has been edited by moonbeam (08-14-2007 04:50 PM).]

Roysie
Member

since 2007-08-05

Posts 102
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-13 01:32 PM

Now THAT'S funny. LOL

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