Critical Analysis #2 |
legends that did exist |
rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Warrior women known for their strength Meant to leave their mark. Forgotten and disbelieved Despite their legendary start. The goddess's of death who ruled Africa with iron fist. No longer take breath WHY now are they myth? |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
quote: This is a nice start. goddess's ? I think you could have a lot of fun here, but of course you're just scratching the tip of the iceberg (mixing metaphors again, Brad?). At any rate, I wouldn't let this one lie, I'd play around with the form one day, go free verse, then back to form, etc. See what happens. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I need a better title but goddess because they worshipped sopposedly goddess's of some kinda and the other civilizations at the time the europeans primarliy were afraid of t hem . They would kill men they found in battle and capture men in order to move their race forward and they killed or gave back the boy babies and adopted the girls. |
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