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Shaddow1 Junior Member
since 2006-09-04
Posts 41Kingman Az, USA |
Hush… Hush my baby There is no need to cry Mommy is here Right by your side Hush little one You have nothing to fear Safe in my arms I’ll always be here Hush baby boy You’re never alone I will always be with you, even after I’m gone Because a part of me lies within your untainted heart Hush now, rest your eyes No need for those tears, now don’t cry I’ll never show you anything but my deepest love Such joy I feel just watching you as you sleep Hush and dream wonderful dreams For you are my miracle, my dream come true My biggest reason to live, what makes my world turn Proof that you can live a life full of happiness Hush now my child, go to sleep Mommy will be here, waiting for you to wake When you do, it will be the beginning of a new day And with every breath, you become more able and strong Yes, my precious baby boy Rest, so when you awake, full of laughs, tears and dirty diapers I will beam with nothing but love, pride, and The purest happiness I have ever felt Just knowing you’re a day older and a day closer A day closer to becoming a wonderful man, husband And proud FATHER Then will you watch your own baby sleep You will feel, then, as I do now In that moment alone you will come to realize just how Special and how much you truly mean to me Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
Wow.. I love this. It was amzing. I'm not a mother but I understand this. Wonderful. Loved it. I hope to hear more from you ~heather~ Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
Ahh, nothing warms the heart like a child. I'm not a mother myself, but i have alot of children around me constantly, that i care for. Once they enter your life they are truly your reason for living. You would sacrifice anything for them to be happy and safe. I completely understand this poem. Its wonderful. then theres the moment of silence, the eye of the storm, when the whole world collapses, i want to be in your arms |
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Shaddow1 Junior Member
since 2006-09-04
Posts 41Kingman Az, USA |
Thank you guys very much  I don't actually remember writing this poem. I only remember they dream that I had. I think I wrote this poem half asleep because it describes the dream I had so well. Every thing that I fely for my baby... But thank you. And I hope to add many more poems to this site. |
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