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Shaddow1
Junior Member
since 2006-09-04
Posts 41
Kingman Az, USA

0 posted 2006-09-04 02:29 PM



Hush…
Hush my baby
There is no need to cry
Mommy is here
Right by your side

Hush little one
You have nothing to fear
Safe in my arms
I’ll always be here

Hush baby boy
You’re never alone
I will always be with you, even after I’m gone
Because a part of me lies within your untainted heart

Hush now, rest your eyes
No need for those tears, now don’t cry
I’ll never show you anything but my deepest love
Such joy I feel just watching you as you sleep

Hush and dream wonderful dreams
For you are my miracle, my dream come true
My biggest reason to live, what makes my world turn
Proof that you can live a life full of happiness

Hush now my child, go to sleep
Mommy will be here, waiting for you to wake
When you do, it will be the beginning of a new day
And with every breath, you become more able and strong

Yes, my precious baby boy
Rest, so when you awake, full of laughs, tears and dirty diapers
I will beam with nothing but love, pride, and
The purest happiness I have ever felt
Just knowing you’re a day older and a day closer
A day closer to becoming a wonderful man, husband
And proud FATHER
Then will you watch your own baby sleep
You will feel, then, as I do now
In that moment alone you will come to realize just how
Special and how much you truly mean to me

Love is like a Rose; it always dies - Britney Miller

© Copyright 2006 Britney Anne Miller - All Rights Reserved
the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
1 posted 2006-09-04 11:32 PM


Wow.. I love this. It was amzing. I'm not a mother but I understand this. Wonderful. Loved it.

I hope to hear more from you

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

loveislove
Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59
USA
2 posted 2006-09-05 04:19 PM


Ahh, nothing warms the heart like a child. I'm not a mother myself, but i have alot of children around me constantly, that i care for. Once they enter your life they are truly your reason for living. You would sacrifice anything for them to be happy and safe. I completely understand this poem. Its wonderful.

then theres the moment of silence, the eye of the storm, when the whole world collapses, i want to be in your arms

Shaddow1
Junior Member
since 2006-09-04
Posts 41
Kingman Az, USA
3 posted 2006-09-08 12:23 PM


Thank you guys very much I don't actually remember writing this poem. I only remember they dream that I had. I think I wrote this poem half asleep because it describes the dream I had so well. Every thing that I fely for my baby... But thank you. And I hope to add many more poems to this site.
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