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Critical Analysis #2

My everything

loveislove
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

0 posted 2006-07-13 04:03 PM

You're everything I stand for
And everything I stand against
I want to get close to you
But I cant let you get too close to me
If I let you in, you can hurt me
If I shut you out,I hurt myself
You're all I want
But I cant be with you
I want you
And you want me
But were miles apart
In body and soul
You were my first
I want you to be my last
And you will always be
My Everything

The more people that I can make EXTREMELY uncomfortable, the better

Oreo22
New Member

since 2006-07-13

Posts 2

1 posted 2006-07-13 04:40 PM

i thought it was good

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-07-13 10:19 PM

You're everything I stand for
And everything I stand against

wow those two lines are very powerful.. great job.. I really like the idea in this one..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

loveislove
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 59
USA

3 posted 2006-07-16 06:12 PM

thanks ppl....im just so awesome...u have to love me and my poetry...lol...<33

The more people that I can make EXTREMELY uncomfortable, the better

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