Critical Analysis #2 |
My everything |
loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
You're everything I stand for And everything I stand against I want to get close to you But I cant let you get too close to me If I let you in, you can hurt me If I shut you out,I hurt myself You're all I want But I cant be with you I want you And you want me But were miles apart In body and soul You were my first I want you to be my last And you will always be My Everything The more people that I can make EXTREMELY uncomfortable, the better |
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Oreo22 New Member
since 2006-07-13
Posts 2 |
i thought it was good |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
You're everything I stand for And everything I stand against wow those two lines are very powerful.. great job.. I really like the idea in this one.. ~heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
thanks ppl....im just so awesome...u have to love me and my poetry...lol...<33 The more people that I can make EXTREMELY uncomfortable, the better |
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