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Critical Analysis #2

Mary's Sonic Boom

kif kif
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since 2006-06-01

Posts 439
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0 posted 2006-06-06 05:09 AM

To the heart of Hammond's organ,
fairground keys clink
as a voice calls out, exultant;
"Yeah, you see this,
knock three times so I know it's you."

It's an arc that brings down the bridge,
from a gate that cries a tune.
That lets me through to a vessel,
a fleet of youth.

Tie a knot of understanding,
to hear bells that are hit by tubes
in exitement,
rude meat brims the captain's table,
crystal tears fountain from this wood!

Brad
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since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

1 posted 2007-01-10 05:51 PM

I liked this. Pirates of the Caribbean on a closed night. The second stanza/strophe was particularly interesting.

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