Critical Analysis #2 |
Mary's Sonic Boom |
kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
To the heart of Hammond's organ, fairground keys clink as a voice calls out, exultant; "Yeah, you see this, knock three times so I know it's you." It's an arc that brings down the bridge, from a gate that cries a tune. That lets me through to a vessel, a fleet of youth. Tie a knot of understanding, to hear bells that are hit by tubes in exitement, rude meat brims the captain's table, crystal tears fountain from this wood! |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
I liked this. Pirates of the Caribbean on a closed night. The second stanza/strophe was particularly interesting. |
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