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"The Thin Line"
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"The Thin Line" |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
The Thin Line No topic is off limits; let me walk you till I’m finished I’ma keep writing my feelings till you begin to start to feel’em I spend all my time feeling like I’m cloaked in a tomb I’m wrapped up in the truth, as I write, soaked of my wound I spill my guts wit my pen till the ink runs out of room so don’t make me spoil my plans and think this is all but a spoof Let ur tears slip with kinship evolved only into friendship Can’t fight the tears of loneliness wit every ink the pen drips All my emotion, hallucinating makes me dive to the floor I picture you standing in the door and I can’t hide it no more I think about you all the time, still remain in my mind All the times I rewind, reminds me back then, when u were mind I have to respect that, my feelings can’t get attached I can’t cross the thin line even though when opposites attract So its better I calm fast, I have to stop myself of contact I have to live with that but my intuition has been brought back I gotta eat my instincts and start to feed my decision Believing what friends think and to always keep my distance But I wont! The times I wanted you back, was all hinted and everything bright in my life has turned tinted and off limits All I wanna do is pretend like we still spoke on the phone Every minute that passes, the more ur voice tone is unknown I can’t be caught stealing, shes not the one that I own If he knew my intentions he wouldn’t leave, me and her, all alone Im fighting cuz I don’t wanna lose what we had to begin with Your actions are relentless, I don’t wanan jeopardize whats intended If I write u a letter in thin strips, will ya know where its from? I only salvage a friendship with the THIN LINES when I tear it up. There’s always a thin line we can’t cross, but no topic is too off limits. |
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Khatharsis Junior Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 42 |
uppin. leave links and i'll return the favour. |
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loveislove Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 59USA |
i like the idea of this...it seems a little off in some parts but for the most part its really good.... The more people that I can make EXTREMELY uncomfortable, the better |
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