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7TH POST>EPITAPH
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7TH POST>EPITAPH |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
EPITAPH TO ALL THE FRIENDS WHO HAVE GRACED MY HOME  THIS IS WHAT I HOPE THE SUPREME BEING WILL SAY TO ME WHEN WE FINALLY MEET... SHE WAS A VERY QUIRKY GAL NON-JUDGEMENTAL, FAIR AND IF YOU VISITED HER HOME YOU COULD FIND PEACE THERE SHE UNDERSTOOD SADNESS SHE KNEW HOW TO CARE AND IF YOU VISITED HER HOME YOU COULD CRY THERE SHE WAS AQUAINTED WITH ANGER TELL IT ALL IF YOU DARE BECAUSE IF YOU VISITED HER HOME YOU COULD VENT THERE SHE KNEW WELL OF "WEARY" AND HOW SOMETIMES, "YOU DON'T CARE" SO IF YOU VISITED HER HOME YOU COULD SLEEP THERE SHE HAD FELT AGONIZING PAIN SO IF YOU HURT EVERYWHERE YOU COULD VISIT HER HOME AND FIND COMFORT THERE SHE HAD KNOWN MUCH HAPPINESS SO TO SMILE, LAUGH AND SHARE YOU COULD VISIT HER HOME AND FIND JOY THERE SHE KNEW JUST HOW TO PRAY SO IF YOUR SOUL WAS IN DISPARE YOU COULD VISIT HER HOME AND FIND YOUR GOD THERE SHE HAD LOST HER HOME MANY TIMES BEFORE NO MATTER... SHE HAD OPEN ARMS, A PAIR SO YOU COULD VISIT HER STRONG EMBRACE AND ALWAYS...BE WELCOME THERE... BY MUSEconnieHUES WED. OCT. 26, 2005 Author's Comments: "I HAVE AN OPEN DOOR POLICY WHEN I AM NEEDED BY DESERVING FRIENDS. FORTUNATELY, THEIR HOMES ARE OPEN TO ME ALSO." I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
As a new member to CA, you likely don't know how slowly it usually moves. The stated goal or purpose of this forum is to analyze poems in some depth. This can take some time. By posting so many so quickly, you dilute the ability (and possibly even the interest) of your companions to do so. A general guideline around PIP is to not post more than 3 per day. In CA, we usually suggest to usually not post more than one at any time. Let that one get its due before posting another. We all appreciate your exuberance at finding a new place to write and be read but you will serve your interest better if you slow down a bit. Please understand that I don't want to discourage you in any way but just suggest that ther is not enough time to give each of your efforts its proper due. Thanks for understanding. Pete |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
THANK YOU FOR THE TIP. I HAVE ALSO BEEN REVIEWING THOSE WHO HAVE REVIEWED ME. I WILL SLOW DOWN AS YOU ASKED. ESPECIALLY IF I CAN GET SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR MAKING MY WRITES BETTER. ALSO MY VISION MADE IT NEC. TO 'PLAY' WITH THIS FORUM'S ABILITIES SO I COULD LEARN HOW TO POST SUCCESSFULLY. I HAD A DEVIL OF A TIME LAST NIGHT TRYING TO DELETE AN ENTRY. THANK YOU AGAIN FOR EXPLAINING. LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER MUSEconnieHUES I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Muse, I think this poem is just beautiful. It really gives one insight into what a sweet and loving person you are. Loved the message. |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
THANK YOU MS.S.O.! I AM HUMBLED! LOVE LIGHT LAUGHTER I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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