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MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 74
california

0 posted 2006-02-28 07:11 PM

LONELY GODDESS

SHE GLIDED FROM THE SEA
HER HAIR DRIPPING MOONLIGHT

THE TIDE BEGAN TO
KISS THE SHORE
MORE OFTEN
AS SHE DRIED OFF
AND BEGAN TO CLOTHE
HER BRONZE SKIN
IN THE WHITE SERONG

IT HAD NOT BEEN ENOUGH

THE LONG SWIM
INTO THE MOONRISE
THOUGH BREATHLESSLY SENSUAL
HAD FINALLY SAPPED
HER ENERGY
AND SENT HER BACK
TO THE STILLNESS
OF THE GLITTERING BEACH

PERCHING HERSELF
ON A MOUND
SHE TRACED HIS NAME
INTO THE COOLING SAND
AND CRIED HOT TEARS

SHE LOOKED LONGINGLY
TOWARD THE STARLIT SKY
SEARCHING FOR A
HEAVENLY BODY
TO WISH UPON
ONE THAT WOULD BRING
HIS HEAVENLY BODY
BACK TO HER...
I AM LEGALY BLIND SO I POST IN CAPS. I HAVE A VOICE READER THAT HELPS ME READ YOUR POSTS. PLEASE FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. MY SCR-NAME POSTE

[This message has been edited by MUSEconnieSEconnie (03-02-2006 05:43 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-02-28 08:37 PM

CONNIE~
I LOVE WHAT YOU'RE DOING WITH YOUR INK !

PLEASE CONSIDER ALSO POSTING IN OUR OPEN FORUM, WHERE YOU WILL FIND MANY TO READ YOU AND RESPOND TO YOU~

YOUR THOUGHTS HERE HAVE AN 'ANCIENT FEEL' TO THEM ... I LIKE THAT~
*HUGLETS*
~*MARGE*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 74
california

2 posted 2006-02-28 10:14 PM

THANKS MARGE. I WILL GET TO THAT ALSO. I JUST REALLY WANT SOME HELP. ON OTHER SITES I AM NOT GETTING ANY SEIOUS ADVICE. I WAS HOPING THIS THREAD WAS A GOOD PLACE TO START. THANK YOU FOR YOUR WARM WELCOME.

I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES

Not A Poet
Member Elite

since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

3 posted 2006-03-01 03:06 PM

I like this very much. And welcome to the CA forum.

If posting in all caps helps you to see what you are writing the by all means continue to do so. With your new signature, everyone should understand that you are not shouting at us.

Hope to see more from you.

Pete

MsSouthernOrchid
Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

4 posted 2006-03-03 12:30 PM

This is wonderful. You really do have a way with words. Enjoyed it MUCH.

BROTHER JOHN
Member

since 2006-04-06

Posts 386

5 posted 2006-04-07 01:38 PM

DEAR CONNIE,

WE ARE ALL BLIND IN SOMEWAY. WE ALL "SEE IN PART." THANKS FOR HELPING ME "SEE" THRU YOUR POETIC INSIGHT!

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