Critical Analysis #2 |
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2ND POST>LONELY GODDESS |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
LONELY GODDESS ![]() SHE GLIDED FROM THE SEA HER HAIR DRIPPING MOONLIGHT THE TIDE BEGAN TO KISS THE SHORE MORE OFTEN AS SHE DRIED OFF AND BEGAN TO CLOTHE HER BRONZE SKIN IN THE WHITE SERONG ![]() IT HAD NOT BEEN ENOUGH ![]() THE LONG SWIM INTO THE MOONRISE THOUGH BREATHLESSLY SENSUAL HAD FINALLY SAPPED HER ENERGY AND SENT HER BACK TO THE STILLNESS OF THE GLITTERING BEACH ![]() PERCHING HERSELF ON A MOUND SHE TRACED HIS NAME INTO THE COOLING SAND AND CRIED HOT TEARS ![]() SHE LOOKED LONGINGLY TOWARD THE STARLIT SKY SEARCHING FOR A HEAVENLY BODY TO WISH UPON ONE THAT WOULD BRING HIS HEAVENLY BODY BACK TO HER... I AM LEGALY BLIND SO I POST IN CAPS. I HAVE A VOICE READER THAT HELPS ME READ YOUR POSTS. PLEASE FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. MY SCR-NAME POSTE [This message has been edited by MUSEconnieSEconnie (03-02-2006 05:43 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CONNIE~ I LOVE WHAT YOU'RE DOING WITH YOUR INK ! PLEASE CONSIDER ALSO POSTING IN OUR OPEN FORUM, WHERE YOU WILL FIND MANY TO READ YOU AND RESPOND TO YOU~ YOUR THOUGHTS HERE HAVE AN 'ANCIENT FEEL' TO THEM ... I LIKE THAT~ *HUGLETS* ![]() ~*MARGE*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
THANKS MARGE. I WILL GET TO THAT ALSO. I JUST REALLY WANT SOME HELP. ON OTHER SITES I AM NOT GETTING ANY SEIOUS ADVICE. I WAS HOPING THIS THREAD WAS A GOOD PLACE TO START. THANK YOU FOR YOUR WARM WELCOME. ![]() I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I like this very much. And welcome to the CA forum. If posting in all caps helps you to see what you are writing the by all means continue to do so. With your new signature, everyone should understand that you are not shouting at us. Hope to see more from you. Pete |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
This is wonderful. You really do have a way with words. Enjoyed it MUCH. |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
DEAR CONNIE, WE ARE ALL BLIND IN SOMEWAY. WE ALL "SEE IN PART." THANKS FOR HELPING ME "SEE" THRU YOUR POETIC INSIGHT! |
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