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Ceramic Brilliance
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TreeFiddy New Member
since 2005-11-13
Posts 8North Carolina, United States |
Pausing in between the cathedral and the institution: I had filled the exact spot of my revelation, My former belief of my brilliance. Recalling my old powder essay for a moment, but it is back there in the scholarly roads of Athens and I am supposed to be in. I take a shifty step outside of my monument Lest I may be shot Lest I may be taken Mistaken, and on through the institution I would be seen as a troublemaker. Yes, there's nothing I can do Wandering around in this unrealized ceramic. Nothing I churn out these days is quality, they do not tell stories of the monkey's conquest of the Gods they do not have holes to hold tea. I make nickels that are politically correct, it doesn't seem angelic. Righteousness, nobility I close my eyes until passed into the institution. I rotate my old mug to read the full text: "I have been filled with brilliance". Old, old, old. You cannot just turn on the machine. Yet it will be easiest if you do not go mad - It will be easiest to not be driven by your personal visions. |
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MUSEconnieSEconnie Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74california |
THESE LINES ARE TRULY INSPIRED: Yes, there's nothing I can do Wandering around in this unrealized ceramic. EXQUISITE WRITE!  LOVE CONNIE I AM BLIND/I POST IN CAPS. FORGIVE IF THEY ARE UNCOMFORTABLE. A VOICE READER HELPS ME READ POSTS. MY SCR-NAME POSTED WRONG, IT IS MUSEconnieHUES |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
A good read. Enjoyed it. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Really interesting write. I enjoyed it. Loved the wording. The way it's written creates natural pauses which add greatly to tone. I will keep an eye out for more. Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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