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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Why does love have to be pedantic? All I want is to Rip You Open [This message has been edited by eminor_angel (09-17-2005 11:35 PM).] |
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Amen Junior Member
since 2005-09-13
Posts 28Brooklyn, New York |
nice play on words... One critque, which isnt even much of one... Its spelled pedantic |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
Thanks for the comment, Amen, and for the spotting the typo. This wasn't supposed to be in this forum (it was intended for open, but I was in the wrong window), but I guess it's here now. Serendipity? |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
It is more than welcome to stay here but, since CA has "special privileges," You can also post again in Open if you want to. |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
One question for you guys: In the other version of this poem I used "Why does love need to be pedantic?" Which word choice do you think is better? Thanks. |
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