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Critical Analysis #2

Vigil

sunsetgun
Junior Member

since 2005-07-17

Posts 21

0 posted 2005-07-18 04:11 PM

My sleepy gaze falls heavily on
The moon-drenched street below
A narrow band of cobblestones
that runs betwixt our homes
The starlight has now faded
as the night reaches its end
I wonder and I watch for you
and listen for your step
A mighty fire of desire has run
rampant through these veins
as rational and reason are
slowly burned away
This passion it has conquered me
and will not leave me rest
and sets my heart a trembling
with your every living breath
But now I hear your steady step
ring out clear upon the stone
treading down this narrow street
that runs betwixt our homes

Michael Adair

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

1 posted 2005-07-18 11:14 PM

That was exalent. I like how eligant your words were.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

sunsetgun
Junior Member

since 2005-07-17

Posts 21

2 posted 2005-07-19 10:33 AM

again I blush.

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