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haiku (of the long sort)

Ryan
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since 1999-06-10

Posts 297
Kansas

0 posted 2005-05-14 01:48 AM

a light
on the sandbar in the rain
is a man nightfishing
or a train submerging

in heaven,
everything is fine

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2005-05-14 01:35 PM

Mayhaps a lighthouse
or a buoy
Red right return

youcan'tseeme
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since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

2 posted 2005-06-09 09:15 AM

much enjoyed

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-08-29 12:49 PM

a light
on the sandbar in the rain—

a man night fishing
a train submerging
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A thought

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