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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2005-05-08 02:45 PM



Black tie,
seemed comfortable on white
when I entered.
As a dominant scent from loss,  
greets you first.
Although others would corral
with the usual staged choreography.
After sorry,
I sat down for a moment and
could only see still.
Like reality’s mutt, following
the lesser of what you cannot control.
The surroundings somehow
make you feel like a friend.
As the exit reminded me
I have been here before.
I wondered -
Will I be wearing a black tie
when I won’t?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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