'language where all language ends'

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Critical Analysis #2

'language where all language ends'

a123
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 72

0 posted 2005-03-12 10:59 AM

The quiet at night,
the quiet of the night.
Different from the quiet of the day.
Its loud,it makes you aware of itself,
almost shouting in your ears.
noiseless shouts.

quiet is no longer quiet at night.

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-03-12 07:02 PM

Nice write, and it does seem the silence is much louder at night.

No one really cares,,why should I?

cynicsRus
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since 2003-06-06

Posts 591
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2 posted 2005-03-17 10:30 AM

For such a short piece, it's full of redundancy and could be sufficiently summed up with only Lines 2 & 4:

"...the quiet of the night...makes you aware of itself,"

The rest is, "inert filler."

Sid
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