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Critical Analysis #2

Song-Tree

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2004-06-21 11:29 PM

Song-Tree

Tall tree's leaves sing
Stirred by wind's wing;
And water near
Tinkles with tear.
Fowls open voice
Reared to rejoice.
And poets, so,
Frame in the flow.
Kind's kindled strain
Waxes to main
Of wildest wood
To angelhood.
Song swims and rows
In all that grows,
From roots to rise
From swards to skies.

Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 126
Ca

1 posted 2004-06-22 08:43 PM

XXclnt eloquence... would've titled it "TreeSong" tho... unless that is its purpose.. wonderful

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

2 posted 2004-06-26 11:26 PM

Thank'ee my friend.

Is it wide enough to be named "Songtree" or "Treesong"?

Brad
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since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

3 posted 2004-07-04 05:54 PM

Tired?

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

4 posted 2004-07-04 08:17 PM

No; I'm Essorant!

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

5 posted 2004-07-04 10:41 PM

Thanks for the crumb.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2004-07-18 07:14 AM

I'll be honest with you, Ess. I find alliteration, assonance and sibilance in such prominence in so few lines scary.

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

7 posted 2004-07-18 06:43 PM

[This message has been edited by Essorant (07-18-2004 10:51 PM).]

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