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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Ye missed a poem as good as gold the truth without a fall, eternal secrets it did hold then I erased it all! Ye are too late, it's gone away; deleted for another day! [This message has been edited by Essorant (06-12-2004 05:34 PM).] |
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cynicsRus Senior Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 591So Cal So Cool! |
I caught the lines of which you speak but failed I, to record the dancing meter, quite unique, on which my spirit soared. Oh, would that I could but compel you, once again your secret tell. Sorry, Ess...I just couldn't resist. I very much enjoyed yours though. Sid If you must carp: Carpe diem! Visit my poetry forum My poetry |
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gourdmad Member
since 2003-12-01
Posts 136Upper Ohio Valley |
you left this tantalizing clue of something great what it was i can't say i knew because I showed up late maybe this was the one that changed the world but into the void of deletions it's been hurled |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
All the runes and the rites I wrote tall to heighest height Angels aided my pace and note working day and night. Sublimes volumes to grace all great That's what men miss, for being late! |
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