Critical Analysis #2 |
untitled (sorry) |
wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
“Damn, tread on the blue again!” He cursed as the thread, wound around his leg, and tangled a bangle of lace that cut short his circulation. A, B, smudged ink on his hands, long lining the wrinkle so “You shall spell right!” He tripped. ---- help me find a title! and also, please do criticize it, tear it apart, shread it to pieces, how else am i meant to progress? "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
Um. I don't get it. |
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