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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina 
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Well, this is my first post on here. I hope to be a regular if things work out. I'm an old friend of Effigy--if any of you know him. But without Further Ado! BE COOL Quiet twisted thoughts play origami though my head as Miles Davis plays in the corner. "Be Cool," he says. --Well Easy for him to say. He never lived in a world with Electric Pocket Organizers and Digital CDMA phones. It's a mad world and it's getting madder. "Be Cool," he says. What about DSL versus Cable Modems? What about satellite versus cable tv? What about DVD versus VHS? "Be Cool," he says. How can you be so cool? He turns. He smiles. Then he puts that trumpet to his lips and out comes a cascade of notes that puzzles back the sphynx a decade or two. He colors those notes magenta and mauve while a six-toed cat purrs in Key West. The cosmos sits on it's ear and I am still. He smiles. "Be Cool, Man. Be Cool." [This message has been edited by forne_marin (04-15-2004 09:07 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Miles would be smiling at this one, it's cool, way cool. And you are right, he did play mauve notes that cascaded as well as any waterfall.  Welcome to Passions, I really enjoyed this unique, wonderful write! |
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TheGirlNoOneKnew Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 92PA, USA |
Welcome to passions, or PIP as I call it! Lovely write you have here, good to see some new styles being shown in our writers.  |
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forne_marin Member
since 2004-04-13
Posts 140Spartanburg, South Carolina |
Boggles my mind. I just learned something today. Did you know that Mauve is one of the most commonly mispronounced words in the English language? Most people pronounce it mawve, when it should be pronounced Mov, rhyming with "grove" or "stove". Check it out! Blew my mind!! |
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