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Love [4-liner]

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2004-03-30 12:10 PM

Of being whole,
  A meeting
    In the
     Soul

"For ever it was and ever it shal bifalle
That love is he that alle may binde;
For may no man for-do the law of kind"
--Chaucer

[This message has been edited by Essorant (03-30-2004 12:52 PM).]

cynicsRus
Senior Member

since 2003-06-06

Posts 591
So Cal So Cool!

1 posted 2004-04-01 02:05 AM

I've noticed you're particularly adept at crafting poems with the fewest of words.
Not as easy as it looks.

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If you must carp: Carpe diem!
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croyles
Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-04-09 07:12 PM

Is this a Concrete Poem?

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

3 posted 2004-04-10 03:29 PM

CynicsRus

The fewest are the truest. Thank you for your kind comment

Croyles

I'm proud to say no concrete was added in the making of this love poem.

gourdmad
Member

since 2003-12-01

Posts 136
Upper Ohio Valley

4 posted 2004-04-10 04:09 PM

On being read,
  resonates
    In the
     Soul

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

5 posted 2004-04-10 06:54 PM

  On being here
   a blessing
     and a
      tear

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

6 posted 2004-04-13 04:48 AM

so true. i like it. good job.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 2004-04-13 06:44 AM

Don't want to break up the happy party or anything guys but I think it's kinda cliched..whole and soul? Brrrrr...

Shrugs, but maybe I'm just a nasty cynic...

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

8 posted 2004-04-14 06:53 PM

I let Chance take care of cliche. She knows best what to do with it.

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