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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
bernard shakey you must remember that in his younger days they came to him, men, every single one of them, and said, "this was not the plan" "of course you are right" he responded, "but still...." years later there was a funeral that many believed was his, and in fact he lay in the casket for quite some time, grinning and convincing everyone that he was more dead than anyone else who had died in recent time, JFK, Jesus, and John Wayne excluded. but soon the word came round that there was orange drink (a particular favorite of his that had helped him through the hardest days) being served in back. not much later, someone glimpsed him near the exit and exclaimed (not asked) "you had us all you had us all and gave it up for that!" "of course you are right" he responded, "but still..." and drank his orange drink and left the room without another word. in heaven, |
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hush Senior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 1653Ohio, USA |
This is sort of odd. I'm too tired to do a very critical reading... but as is, I don't really get it. Was he hiding in someone else's coffin? Or did her fake his own death? I think either I need to go to bed and read it later, or maybe you should expand it a bit for clarity's sake? Hope I've helped. |
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Brad Member Ascendant
since 1999-08-20
Posts 5705Jejudo, South Korea |
Popping this one up -- just because it brought a smile to my face. |
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