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Critical Analysis #2
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eminor_angel
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0 posted 2004-03-11 04:22 PM

Surrender always
Brings you scarlet misery
Your tears scar my hands
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Severn
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1 posted 2004-03-12 02:05 AM

Hi Eminor.

Two recent threads I believe you will benefit from reading:
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/pip/Forum28/HTML/001114.html

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Grover
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2 posted 2004-03-12 07:06 PM

Very nice image.
a123
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since 2004-03-27
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3 posted 2004-03-27 09:54 AM

i love short poems i think they have a better impactloved your last line
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