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On A Cold Winter's Night.
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On A Cold Winter's Night. |
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bgryan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 30North Ireland |
On a cold winter's night as life lay on the ground, I heard a small voice crying yet no one shared the sound. In a far distant land where a lover's tale was told, a tear fell into the sea but only a fool would know. Above the snow capped mountain the moon sang a song in view, as the silence broke the valley my love left me, untrue. On a cold winter's night another heart grew old, I heard a small voice crying her name could not be told. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I liked this alot - the last S4 seems weak to me - I also like the stanza's better in this order: Above the snow capped mountain the moon sang a song in view, as the silence broke the valley my love left me, untrue. On a cold winter's night as life lay on the ground, I heard a small voice crying yet no one shared the sound. In a far distant land where a lover's tale was told, a tear fell into the sea but only a fool would know. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good... but I agree with Wintertao's arrangement! Grover. |
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