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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Pow Gone (In sadness over D.C. tragedy) I want to cry, I want to die I want all the answers to why. My soul a fiery pit of sadness cradled within a heart of love. A world in shambles tumbles storms rage forth no control eye of one shredding another. Methods and choices at hand they barrage through any land gathering prey reducing to sand. No man's destiny can shine upon the wrath of those in turmoil win. Another day shot in head brain dead living, walking, breathing, pow gone. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
WOW LD intensely powerful piece. It's so sad that such tragedies seem never ending. You have expressed so well the senselessness that is happening. You've captured well the sadness in the situation. Bonnie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very tragic. Your poem captures it well. Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lost Dreamer, Pow Gone indeed, another senseless tragedy, such potential lost!Well written! Dennis :^) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Your poem expresses the tradgedy of that happening very powerfully. If that was your intention, you have succeeded beyond measure!! So senselesss it is indeed. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Powerful ! Excellent writing, LD |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, I thank all of you for your reply's, I had just read that one of the teens shot was brain dead and it just sent me into the mood that this poem came from. I have heard since that this was media screw up, and that this child is not brain dead. I can only pray it's the later. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I hope so too, LD.. this is a powerful poem.. I love your style.. excellent!! Hey, I hope the first line isn't true of you, eh? yeah, it IS stupid.. so shameful what a person can and does do to others.. I s'pose that is one thing I really DO hate, in life.. how humans treat each other.. I mean, yeah, there are good people, and that's the majority.. but sad.. there are also those who would do things like this.. just disappointing.. ={ This poem is so strong.. Love your work.. Lynne |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh* |
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