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Jonas
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0 posted 2000-04-20 07:55 PM


Aura

The aura that surrounds me
is a manifestation
of the beauty I carry within.
Your image;
A colorful portrait
lovingly painted
by a master's hand
on the walls of my mind

© 4/20/00
Gary Pence



 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
- anonymous

© Copyright 2000 Gary - All Rights Reserved
Alicat
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1 posted 2000-04-20 08:15 PM


Short and sweet.  Read it, read it again, then read it again...all I can say is, 'oooooooo...nice'.

Quite a gift you have there....keep it up.  


Alicat

Gene
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2 posted 2000-04-20 08:39 PM


Lovely sentiments, nice metaphor.  

~Gene

Denise
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3 posted 2000-04-20 08:52 PM


This is lovely, Gary!

Denise

ESP
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4 posted 2000-04-21 08:40 AM


*sigh*...lovely and dreamy!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

PrincessPoet
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5 posted 2000-04-21 11:14 PM


Very Nice,
   Thanks for sharing it with us Jonas


 Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up.
-Yoruba Proverb

Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


Yu Lan
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6 posted 2000-04-22 03:04 AM


nice, Jonas.. sweet.. and true, eh? ^_^
Aah, I must look for some more.. this is quite a poem u have here ^_^

Lynne

Jonas
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7 posted 2000-04-22 10:56 AM


Thank you everyone  

I really love this one also. This poem wrote itself.

 "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything."
- anonymous

twinsgd
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8 posted 2000-04-22 09:18 PM


Very nice Jonas
Dim the lights someone I'll bet he glows in the dark.
Nice feeling.

Jack

poetFemmeFatale
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9 posted 2000-04-23 11:25 PM


I'm always sort of "backwards", so I guess that's why the first 3 lines are my favorite!  Usually it's the poems ending that pulls me, but not this time!  You said so much there....wow!  I love the whole aura thing...my grandmother has taught me alot about them, although I still don't understand it all.  Very interesting though!  Lovely work here sir!  
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10 posted 2000-04-24 04:04 AM


Gary~
A lovely aura indeed.
~*Marge*~


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11 posted 2000-04-24 08:01 AM


This is excellent, I love it  
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12 posted 2004-12-25 10:38 AM


whew! nice!
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