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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Aura The aura that surrounds me is a manifestation of the beauty I carry within. Your image; A colorful portrait lovingly painted by a master's hand on the walls of my mind © 4/20/00 Gary Pence "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Short and sweet. Read it, read it again, then read it again...all I can say is, 'oooooooo...nice'. Quite a gift you have there....keep it up. Alicat |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Lovely sentiments, nice metaphor. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Gary! Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
*sigh*...lovely and dreamy! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Very Nice, Thanks for sharing it with us Jonas Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice, Jonas.. sweet.. and true, eh? ^_^ Aah, I must look for some more.. this is quite a poem u have here ^_^ Lynne |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you everyone I really love this one also. This poem wrote itself. "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very nice Jonas Dim the lights someone I'll bet he glows in the dark. Nice feeling. Jack |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'm always sort of "backwards", so I guess that's why the first 3 lines are my favorite! Usually it's the poems ending that pulls me, but not this time! You said so much there....wow! I love the whole aura thing...my grandmother has taught me alot about them, although I still don't understand it all. Very interesting though! Lovely work here sir! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gary~ A lovely aura indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is excellent, I love it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! nice! |
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