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kaile
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0 posted 2000-04-19 12:53 PM


Bodies tightly locked~
Love wraps a tender blanket~
Heavenly comfort

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blackhalo
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1 posted 2000-04-19 01:40 PM


Beautiful, it flows very well.
blackhalo
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2 posted 2000-04-19 01:41 PM


Beautiful.  It flows very well!
Alicia

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3 posted 2000-04-19 02:54 PM


One word....lovely!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



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Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-04-19 05:13 PM


Kaile, reading such a beautifully written haiku is ecstasy!  You have added new meaning and life to love.  Do share more haikus with us!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

kaile
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5 posted 2000-04-19 06:08 PM


Alicia...thank you ")

ESP....one word...Grateful! ")

Melissa...yes,i will share more love haikus once i have thought of them...LOL ")

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6 posted 2000-04-19 09:05 PM


Wonderful, kaile.  I do so enjoy your haiku.  Look forward to reading more from you.

Joanna


 What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury



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7 posted 2000-04-19 11:38 PM


Nice one, Kaile!   )
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8 posted 2000-04-20 04:50 AM


Hi, Kaile!
     Nice Haiku, Tender.



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Poetry & Friendship,
PrincessPoet


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9 posted 2000-04-20 07:12 AM


Excellent, I love it.  
INclan
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10 posted 2000-04-20 11:10 AM


Kaile,

I do believe you have captured the spirit.  Excellent writing.  Keep it up!

INclan

Dennis L. White
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11 posted 2000-04-20 11:25 AM


Kaile, Very nice! Keep It UP!  Dennis :^)
kaile
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12 posted 2000-04-20 06:05 PM


Joannak,i too hope i am inspired to write more such haiku to share with you ")

nice compliment,achicade ")

tender recognition,PrincessPoet

thank you,lost dreamer..i love your reply too

INclan,oooooh,i really do hope what you have said is true("captured the spirit") but i am still new and fresh and still have a loooong way to go ")

yes,Dennis.L.White,i will pull up my socks ")

thanx all once again

Denise
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13 posted 2000-04-20 08:59 PM


This is lovely, Kaile!

Denise

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14 posted 2001-12-04 02:40 PM


Kaile... :cool: You speak like an experienced individual... haha...   Enjoyed it...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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