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Ecstasy(a love haiku) |
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Bodies tightly locked~ Love wraps a tender blanket~ Heavenly comfort |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Beautiful, it flows very well. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Beautiful. It flows very well! Alicia |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
One word....lovely!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Kaile, reading such a beautifully written haiku is ecstasy! You have added new meaning and life to love. Do share more haikus with us! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Alicia...thank you ") ESP....one word...Grateful! ") Melissa...yes,i will share more love haikus once i have thought of them...LOL ") |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Wonderful, kaile. I do so enjoy your haiku. Look forward to reading more from you. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Nice one, Kaile! ) |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Hi, Kaile! Nice Haiku, Tender. Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent, I love it. |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Kaile, I do believe you have captured the spirit. Excellent writing. Keep it up! INclan |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Very nice! Keep It UP! Dennis :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Joannak,i too hope i am inspired to write more such haiku to share with you ") nice compliment,achicade ") tender recognition,PrincessPoet thank you,lost dreamer..i love your reply too INclan,oooooh,i really do hope what you have said is true("captured the spirit") but i am still new and fresh and still have a loooong way to go ") yes,Dennis.L.White,i will pull up my socks ") thanx all once again |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Kaile! Denise |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kaile... :cool: You speak like an experienced individual... haha... Enjoyed it... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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