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Ecstasy(a love haiku) |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore ![]() |
Bodies tightly locked~ Love wraps a tender blanket~ Heavenly comfort |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Beautiful, it flows very well. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Beautiful. It flows very well! Alicia |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
One word....lovely!! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Kaile, reading such a beautifully written haiku is ecstasy! You have added new meaning and life to love. Do share more haikus with us! ![]() Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Alicia...thank you ![]() ESP....one word...Grateful! ![]() Melissa...yes,i will share more love haikus once i have thought of them...LOL ![]() |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Wonderful, kaile. I do so enjoy your haiku. Look forward to reading more from you. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Nice one, Kaile! ![]() |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Hi, Kaile! Nice Haiku, Tender. Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent, I love it. ![]() |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Kaile, I do believe you have captured the spirit. Excellent writing. Keep it up! INclan |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Very nice! Keep It UP! Dennis :^) |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Joannak,i too hope i am inspired to write more such haiku to share with you ![]() ![]() nice compliment,achicade ![]() tender recognition,PrincessPoet thank you,lost dreamer..i love your reply too ![]() ![]() INclan,oooooh,i really do hope what you have said is true("captured the spirit") but i am still new and fresh and still have a loooong way to go ![]() ![]() yes,Dennis.L.White,i will pull up my socks ![]() ![]() thanx all once again |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Kaile! Denise |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kaile... :cool: You speak like an experienced individual... haha... ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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