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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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0 posted 2000-04-17 06:26 AM


Sing Once More

Sing your sweet, sweet song once more
Before you go away
Strum the notes on your guitar
Just like you used to play

Step upon the stage of life
Let me hear you sing
Of friends and love and promises
That life will surely bring

Pluck the heartstrings, sound a chord
Strum a melody
Make my heart dance to the rhythms
Meant for only me

Make the music fill my spirit
Echoing from afar
Vibrating chords resounding passion
From depths of your guitar

Sing love’s tender,lonely songs
That always break my heart
Step upon the stage once more
Again before we part

Elizabeth Santos



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-17-2000).]

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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-17 06:50 AM


This is so beautiful, I think it is what the French might call "triste"-romantically sad. Lovely poem....I stand as ever in awe of your talent with words and verse.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

2 posted 2000-04-17 09:32 AM


This is truly excellent Liz (if I may call you that)a lovely fluid easy to read piece from your heart.

Really Really Good.


Jon

twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
Posts 416
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3 posted 2000-04-17 12:22 PM


Such grace you bring to The Pub with your poetry Liz.
Beautiful.

Jack

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
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4 posted 2000-04-17 02:16 PM


He sang to me
his eyes closed tight
and reverie entangled
refrains that grew within his heart
where love is ever after.

I saw his spirit whisper
blow softly by my ear
and the words that flowed
will bring me peace
for all the coming years

Dearest Liz, thank you for this lovely poem and your thoughts of me...much love I'm sending your way.

Denise
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5 posted 2000-04-17 02:44 PM


Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful!

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-04-17 05:21 PM


Liz, Thank you dear. I appreciate your reading my poems, and thank you for your very sweet remarks
Liz

Jon. Thanks so much for your comments
Liz

Jack, Thank you. What a nice compliment
Liz

Martie, Guess you can tell I was thinking of you today. Glad you liked this little poem
Liz

Thanks Denise
Love you
Liz

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7 posted 2000-04-18 07:32 AM


Elizabeth, my dear~
What a lovely poem you've written
for such a lovely lady.
Your heart is filled with such kindness.

*Martie~
Such a lovely poetic response.
~*Marge*~


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Somewhere near the Rainbow
8 posted 2000-04-18 11:55 AM


Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful, thanks for sharing it here with us.  
passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-12-25 10:21 AM


how beautiful Liz
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