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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA 
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"The Dark" Darkness looms around me Waiting; set to pounce Shadows steal around me Fear they do pronounce Tapestries draw inward Light then filters out Demons swoop down in toward A familiar route Dreams I cannot ponder Voices take control Nowhere left to wander They will have my soul Chains begin to tighten Pressure on my heart I begin to weaken Memories take part Enemies are laughing Malicious and cruel They continue harping Whilst I play the fool Forgive me now, my parent My mind has blown away Should I? No, I daren't Make the monkeys pay I'll just sit here rocking With a gentle pace While they continue stalking, I will give no chase --End-- |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Welcome, Wikket. Wow! This is awesome! Loved it. I feel honored that I was your fist post. Welcome, welcome, wlelcome. You'll love it here. Oh, BTW, did I say welcome?  ~Gene |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Wikket! Excellent poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WELCOME Wikket... you gonna love it here...everyone is so supportive and great...AND talented...you will fit right in...this poem is very nice...very good!!!!!!!!  take care, janet marieSome things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this...but I love your poem "Truth".. it's wonderful..you have a great homepage!!! I recommend everyone check it out!  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Liked this. If you write a lot of dark poems such as this, may I suggest checking out Dark Passions? (That is unless you haven't already) It's a great place too! Welcome! |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
Wow wikket. Yay! loved it! I am so glad you're here. -wen"I am everything you want I am everything you need. I am everything inside of you That you wish you could be I say all the right things At exactly the right time But I mean nothing to you And I don't know why." -"Everything You Want" Vertical Horizon |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Truth ? Even better than this one ? Welcome to the Pub Wikket ! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Breathtaking.. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Welcome to Passions, Wikket!!! I look forward to reading more of your work. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Well wikket what can i say??¿ i like your style....it's dark,yet instead of disturbing to me,it's more of a comfort,and i thank you =] swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
This is good! I like it! Welcome to the zcorner Pub, Wikket Probably only one thing though.. u repeated "..around me" in the first stanza.. and .. well it takes a little of the magic away.. hehe.. I did that in one of my poems too.. repeated "around her".. and, really there are better words, eh Wikket? ^_^ Not to say it is BAD to do that.. of course not.. Anyway, I will read more of your poetry.. I like this.. Lynne |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Good first post Wikket and welcome. Excellent poetry Jack |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Hello Wikket! I'm new too, Welcome. You're gonna Love this Place, Enjoy! I like your poem Poetry & Frienship, From: PrincessPoet |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I cna relate |
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