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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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dear guys, recently i wrote this On a fiery day, the displeased gods vent their ire Green penguins wobble i will be interested to know what you interpret by this...  ") |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I love the words and the way they flow, had you been sniffing something though? May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
So, were the gods so angry that they turned the penguins green? LOL, Alicia Renzelman |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
On a sunny day The pleased gods vent their pleasure Yellow pinguins walk Uhh....LOL I have no idea...  |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I don't know either exactly, but I'm awfuly interested now. Just what is with these green penguins? lol! Joy |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Could it be squatty green pine trees in a firestorm? You have me stumpped! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
im sorry for not explaining my haiku then(have forgotten about it all) but will solemnly promise to explain this this time round [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; You've got me stumped! But interested, waiting for the answer to this one! Ellie |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Well I will take a guess, Is it a volcano erupting, and the trees are wobbling? Couldn't think of anything else, please explain..!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for ur interpretations...am here to explain On a fiery day~ that day was scorching hot the displeased gods vent their ire~then it started to rain heavily green penguins wobble~i was in the army and we used GREEN raincoats whenever it rained...however these raincoats are often too big for us and we had difficulty moving around in them...hence it is a joke among us that we look like PENGUINS trying hard to move nimbly hope you had fun with this piece!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ LOL ! What a vivid picture ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Before I read your comment about green raincoats in the rain, I thought of the forest fires in Australia. fiery day = hot day Gods vent their ire = somehow they created a fire coz they were so displeased green penguins wobbled = this stumbled me but i was thinking along the lines of tree branches full of leaves falling to the ground and 'bouncing' around for a while??? hahah... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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