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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I stand in the middle of a lush green field that seems to stretch forever Where emeralds sparkle bright and possibilities seem endless No one's around for miles No one to point and stare Just the pigeons cooing their happy song and the butterflies mating in ecstasy Just the stray dogs lying idily and the flowers smiling fondly at me I'm alone I'm glad Raising my hands to the sapphire sky, I yell and scream Negative harsh feelings spill out from me, like angry towering waves breaking free from a dam at long last I feel great. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes ya just gotta scream!! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Or beat sand with a bat...lol. What better place to do it - alone - to keep from hurting anyone else with angry words - yet allowing your anger an outlet. I like this a lot Kaile. I can relate.< !signature--> Â ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kaile, I love this, very nice job. I love the line: butterflies mating in ecstasy Thanks for sharing your tranquility with us.  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Aah, this is such a great poem Kaile. I always love to read your work.. this is no exception. ^_^ yeah, that is one advantage of being alone.. ^_^ gotta go.. geez.. I never have enough time in this forum any more! *_^ Lynne |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you Denise, childomine, Gloria and Yu Lan for reading and replying |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wow! This is just fantastic. It made me feel good, too! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Such release ! Enjoyed a look into your 'meadow'. So often I've found quiet tranquility in an open meadow - I sing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kaile, a wonderful poem, very tranquil. "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wowee life's good eh? ... hmmm yup this piece made me feel good. Astounding, kaile! *S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Ooh!! I've done this once... On the breakwaters at one of the beaches in Australia, where I thought that no one would hear me over the thundering waves. oh GOSH! It definitely felt good!! It was GREAT!_,,,^.^,,,_ |
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