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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Faithful You hold my devotion In your hands A part of my life A single grain of the sands You have the ability To change it all You decide Whether we stand or fall I won't desert you I've never tried to run Why start now When our fun's just begun I will be faithful Forever I promise A symbol of my love Sealed with a kiss Be my Romeo I'll be your Juliet Our love is something I won't soon forget |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
He is a lucky man ![]() May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Alicia! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautiful. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very nice poem, I liked this part: "Be my Romeo I'll be your Juliet Our love is something I won't soon forget" |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Alicia--This is a very lovely poem. Your "Romeo" is lucky that he has such a wonderful "Juliet." "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
It is the east Etc. Lucky guy. Jon |
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