»
Archives
»
The Corner Pub
»
Daddy Loves Me....
| The Corner Pub |
|
Daddy Loves Me.... |
|
|
ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Daddy loves me..... Daddy comes into my room each night And as he does, fear I fight. He says he loves me very much, Then he removes my nightie and starts to touch. All over me his fingers run, He tells me this is our fun. That was enough for him in the distant past, Now for alot longer these sessions last. He gets into my bed and together we lie Soon comes pain that makes me want to die. Why does Daddy's love hurt me so? I want him to leave but I can't make him go. Daddy says what we do is special, He calls me his "little rose petal". I told Daddy that he makes me sore down below But he acts as though he doesn't know. Do all little girls have daddies like mine? If they do, does that make it fine? I want Mommy to come and make everything okay, But she doesn't know and I'm not allowed to say. Daddy says my body is his to use And that if I say anything we both will lose. I've always been Daddy's girl, And will be until the secret unfurl. I don't think Daddy understands how much this hurts me... If he did, wouldn't he cease this torture and let me be? "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
||
| © Copyright 2000 ESP - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A very powerful piece.Very sad. I can't say more. Jon |
||
|
childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
ESP, I cry as I read this. Poignant. If this isn't about you, you've done a great job of writing about a common reality. If it is, you've done a wonderful job of expressing yourself. The monster that he is within takes without feeling or sight. I have gone beyond his darkness. to stand once again in the light. [This message has been edited by childomine (edited 04-05-2000).] |
||
|
ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Childomine, it isn't about me. I tried putting myself in the shoes of the many children for whom this is a reality. I was crying inside when I wrote it.  |
||
|
Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Whew! this is very powerful and so well expressed. I'm glad to hear it's not about you, but it makes me sad for all those for whom it is. ~Gene |
||
|
Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
You've really done a great job with this. This type of thing happens to much in the world,it's so sad. swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
||
|
John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Deeply disturbing poem. It makes me feel so angry and sad and, well..... |
||
|
twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Lizzie ...you did a really good job of putting an abominable crime out on the table. While I may be sad for the victims....the overwhelming emotion is that it makes me really mad. Well done! Jack |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
