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Leveling Thine Soul |
Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Leveling Thine Soul Where ye knights shall travel half in scorning I shall be here at thy castle forever adorning I curtsy to milords who allow thee to gape as to thy bedchamber thou rises with cape. I thyself take ye honor to shine thou boots thou ancestry falls akin from mighty roots thee quest it be for milords to see thy face as graceful as that of princess's flowing lace. Christened to be where thou lie as honorable giving all of thee in desire to be embraceable counting not ye miles of distance yet fought but continuance of thou eyes to measure me leveling thine soul to love thou caution free. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Awesome poem. It makes you think. You are a really good poet, thanks for posting! Hope, Alicia |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Esmeralda!!! You sound like one Woman of Passion... loved it! |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
I love the beauty of your words Esmerelda. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a delightful poem Esmeralda. I enjoyed it greatly. |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
I love how you use so much old english in your poems....it's awesome....so much more poetic and romantic than today's hideous expressions!!My thanks for the lovely reading =] Swamp Faeryie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
I in honor thank all of thee from thy depths of thine heart, thou words of praise succumb me to flutter graciously like thy birds of paradise in flight. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, Your style and form are intriguing as are the characters you weave with your words! This is a beautiful work! Dennis :^) |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Sir Dennis, I curtsy to you most kindly with thanks. |
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